I wrote a summary for a short story, I just want your opinions please?

A mother and her three daughters move to a new town after the divorce. There, all the men of the town were living personifications of chivalry and all looked like prince charming; they cooked, clean, helped and did most of the work to please and flatter their women. It wasn't until they realize that every month, a woman who was wearing red clothing would disappear, and the day after new food would come to the market. The three girls began to notice that when every man smiled they would hear a low growl and notice that their eyes were gray, and their teeth is similar to that of a wolf.I wrote a summary for a short story, I just want your opinions please?
Cool!! It's some kind of adaption from Little Red Riding Hood, right?

Very creative; i like this idea. Is this a short story for school, or...?

Either way, i really like it. Go ahead and write it already, so i can rest in peace knowing it was written.



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i am not one for werewolves, much, but i like the idea. it's mystery, and fantasy all in one-sounds like my kinda book. i would definitely read it.

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Sounds like somethin I would read,i really like it when people mix realistic fiction with fantasy,it really changes things up a bit from the usual.I was just wandering what the red clothing was about? :)
Sounds cool.

i'd read it.

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