I wrote a summary for a short story, I just want your opinions please?

A mother and her three daughters move to a new town after the divorce. There, all the men of the town were living personifications of chivalry and all looked like prince charming; they cooked, clean, helped and did most of the work to please and flatter their women. It wasn't until every month, a woman who was wearing red clothing would disappear, and the day after new food would come to the market. The three girls began to notice that when every man smiled they would hear a low growl and notice that their eyes are gray, and that their teeth is similar to that of a wolf.I wrote a summary for a short story, I just want your opinions please?
lol it sounds like the male version of stepford wives meets little red riding hood, but i would soooo read that